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Bad_Boy · Joined: 01 Jun 2005 Posts: 2

http://www.pspcomplete.com/PSP_Complete_Magazine-June05-Edition.rar
tell me what you think guys, as it took me a while to make it -id appreciate the feedback.

Guest · Posted: Wed Jun 01, 2005 7:07 pm Post subject:

Not a bad effort at all. I didn't look at every page, so haven't formed any complete opinions yet.

You might consider distributing also in PDF. Maybe the images were for people to show on their PSP ? You probably don't want to limit to just that format. Especially requested reviewers, probably would rather look at the PDF.

lynx44 · Joined: 01 Jun 2005 Posts: 12

Yeah, it appears to be made for the PSP. I think its kind of funny that there are directions on how to get the images on your PSP, when you are supposed to be viewing the magazine itself on the PSP.

It looks really good. The design is very nice. However, I think the writing could use some help - its not bad, but you can tell that it isn't professional. Also, there's something odd about the transition between sections. Perhaps its the fact that the heading doesn't stand out on each page, it seems like you just jum into reviews and such. I think it would help if you had a table of contents.

Overall though, it looks great. Very good first effort.

-Matt

Bad_Boy · Joined: 01 Jun 2005 Posts: 2

thanks for the input guys. im hearing table of contents alot, so ill be sure to include that in the next issues. thanks again

wulf · Joined: 13 Apr 2005 Posts: 81

very good stuff!